Sumi H. Inkblot

Heehee. ^_^ I love your poems, Goldie. "Monsters Under my Bed" and "Jam". I have absolutely nothing to add to the above, and this is turning into the horrid crit ...

Firstly I'd like to point out that you have this recurring rhyme of "anyway/(just)way" and "day", even out of the chorus. (It would be nice if you put in the ...

Um....what? How is red hair a "public offense" or whatever? What is this? What is the Answer?! (42!) How often do you brush your teeth? HOW DOES ONE FIND AN ...

Be nice? Do I haftooooooooo? :P In all honesty, I didn't like this. Mostly because I don't like the cut-off sentence mold, but hey, that's personal preference. ^_~ I've read ...

:shakes head: You're tempting me to put up my own pieces of [s]crap[/s] Writing Challenge stuff, Aet, and frankly it's disturbing me. ^_~ By the way, he's totally on crack. ...

Erm... what?? The only real comment I have on this piece is that I'm confused. Muchly confused. You've got under 10 paragraphs here, 3 of them not belonging with the ...

Mary-Sue alert! Mary-Sue alert! Code red! CODE RED! :shinobi jump in wearing lime green rubber suits and proceed to fill the room with smoke: EDIT....I return for a real critique. ...

[s]Gasp! FMA Rippoff! FMA Rippoff! :hugs little Wraith and Envy:[/s] :Ahem: That was totally uncalled for, but.... :hugs Envy and Wraith plushies: I don't feel like line-by-lining. :P 1. You're ...

No offense, dear, but you've really got to set it back to black. :? I'm seein' stripes, even though I'm using Chimped Out. Bolded letters/words are my inserted words, underlined ...

Ummm...OK. This dude gets hit by lightning then just goes inside? o_0 No pain or anything? You have little/no to nitpick in the way of grammar, so I'll not bother ...

Erm, just so you know I don't want to get tangled in a post-war. I really prefer Harry over LotRs. I can agree that Rings has a much more subtle ...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH! You've got a grammar mistake in the title! "Shakespeare's Sonnets are My Bible". :ahem: Eh....romance. :P Overall, it's a nice idea, but something like this needs to be BAM-short

I don't like this, in my usual contrast to Ratchet. And it isn't my usual elf/dwarf bias, either. You do entirely too much telling, not enough showing. " The two ...

I finished it in....eight or nine hours. Give or take snack breaks. :P It was intense. It was beautiful. It was heartbreaking. It made me cry. It's not a fairy ...

Re-taking this after a serious re-thought. :P 1. Eragon or Harry (as heroes)? 2. Galbatorix or Lord Voldemort (as villains)? 3. The writing style of Christopher Paolini or J.K.Rowling (only ...